Monday, April 25, 2011

Essay #19- Final Project

Jade 

Mr. Salsich

English 9

4/25/11


Introduction


Dear reader,

This is a multi genre essay based on my thoughts on strength of spirit. Whether displayed in literature or found in real life, strength of spirit is omnipresent. In the book A Tale of Two Cities, by Charles Dickens, Sydney Carton displays strength of spirit throughout the entire novel. As we learned of what Carton believed in and cared about, his strength of spirit was revealed to us. In the end, Carton died for what he believed in, showing how much strength he really had. On the other hand, in the book Julius Caesar, by William Shakespeare, Caesar contradicts his strength of spirit. He made a point of remaining firm with his decision to stay home with his wife, much to her consolation. However, as soon as he heard news that appeased his power hungry thoughts, he changed his mind, regardless of his wife's dream. To me, however, strength of spirit depends on both what you believe in and what you do. Our spirit is what we stand for, what makes us unique. When I believe in something, I try to support it as much as I can. It is these beliefs and our involvement in them that make strength of spirit what it is, as well as how important it is to our development.


                                                                                                          Sincerely,
                                                                                                              Jade

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I have eyes,

that can see the wrong you have done.

I have ears,

that can hear the sickness in your tone when you shout.

I have a voice, 

that has stayed silent until today.

Forgive me if I falter,

if my words are weak from disuse.

But believe me,

they are just as strong as your shouts.

I have a brain,

that is smarter than yours.

I have a mind,

that is more intellectual than yours. 

I have a spirit,

that is stronger than yours,

but hasn't been able to speak until today.

Every crushing blow to the heart,

every degrading name,

has only made me stronger,

has only made my spirit flare with anger.

And here you stand,

yelling like a banshee,

saying I have changed,

and I have.

And finally I stand,

having heard enough of your nonsense,

and speak quietly but clearly.

I tell you that I've had enough,

that I'm stronger than you seem to think.

And I give you one chance,

to change your ways,

but like the stubborn mule you are,

you tell me how wrong I am.

As if I am a child,

who doesn't know better.

And I smile sadly,

and turn my back,

and never look back.


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Recipe for Strength of Spirit Cake

Ingredients:

Two cups of integrity

One cup of courage

Two honesty eggs

One teaspoon of dignity (not too much!)

A pinch of anger

A dash of passion



Directions:

Preheat your oven to 375 degrees. Take a large bowl and mix together your integrity and courage first. Make sure you mix these evenly, for they need to be in balance to work well together. Next, add your two honesty eggs and mix well. This will be the glue that holds your cake together. Without honesty,  courage and integrity cannot hold themselves together. Now you can add a teaspoon of dignity. Though this is important to your cake, too much will spoil it. Your last two ingredients are the most important, but the most dangerous. Your passion will come first, you can choose how much you want, but the more passion you have the more anger you will have too. Once all of your ingredients are well mixed take a baking pan and poor your strength of spirit batter inside. Place this into the oven and let it bake for about half an hour. Once this is done cooking set it aside to cool. However remember this: the fresher your strength of spirit cake is, the more strong it will be. Each ingredient will be much more potent when fresh, especially the passion. On the other hand, if left out for too long your cake will be stale and weak flavored. Once your cake is the perfect temperature cut and enjoy with friends.


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Short Story

This is the story of one family that lives in one house, in one neighborhood, in one city, in one state, in one county on this one Earth. Every day the mother of this family goes to work, and every day the son and daughter of this family go to school, and every day the cat and dog of this family roam the streets. And while these members of this family are busy with their suburban days, the last member is out fighting for their county. Every night the mother comes home with a smile on her face, though it is not true, and every night the children do the same. With lonely eyes and false laughter they talk over diner, talk about things they did and people they saw. And every night in bed they talk of the one who is not there. A lonely wife goes to work, lonely children play at school, lonely pets drag their feet, all waiting for the arrival for the one person who is missing. Half way across the world a lonely father fights for his family. Oh but how it makes them stronger, to know the extent of their love. For when the plane lands and the front door opens, this family is whole again. And the wife sings again, and the children dance again, and the dog wags his tale while the cat meows in glee again. And the wounds are healed until next time. This is the story of one family, like so many others, that live in one house, in one neighborhood, in one city, in one state, in one county, on this one Earth, who, like so many others, have strength beyond measure in their spirits.

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Essay #18

Jade
Mr. Salsich
English 9
4/19/11

Opening Paragraph
TS- Different kinds of strength
     CM- Physical, mental, etc.
     CM- Depends on the person
CS- Comes from experience

Body Paragraph
TS- In book, different characters have different strengths
     SD- Cassius is mentally strong
          CM- While talking with Casca, made clear that he was not phased by the storm
          CM- Did not show fear when he presented himself to the Gods
     SD- Brutus is morally strong
         CM- Even though he was convinced to conspire against  Caesar, he still holds his beliefs strong.
         CM- He accepts that they must kill Caesar, but he refuses to kill him savagely
     SD- Portia is strong in her heart
          CM- She is continuously hurt by her husbands lack of trust in her
          CM- The pain she has from her husbands lack of faith in her has made her strong enough to face him
CS- The characters have unique strengths because they are unique people


Closing Paragraph
TS- Strength comes in different forms
     CM- What we endure in day to day life makes us stronger in different ways
     CM- For some, sticking to what they believe in makes them stronger, for others surviving pain makes them stronger.




There are many different kinds of strength in our world that one can attain, all having one thing in common. Whether it be physical, mental, or otherwise, strength is something we earn. With this being said, the strengths that one can have depends solely on that person and what they have endured during their life. Their experiences and hardships shape and mold them to have their own strengths, ones that will help them survive throughout their lifetime. 

In the book Julius Caesar by William Shakespeare, different characters display their strengths in a number of ways. For example, Cassius is mentally strong. While talking with Casca, he made it clear that he was not phased by the onslaught of the storm, however brutal and catastrophic, meaning he was not afraid of the wraith of the Gods. Because of this he did not show fear when he presented himself to the Gods. Brutus, on the other hand, is morally strong. Even though he was convinced to conspire against Caesar, he refuses to loose his beliefs in the violence that is ahead. Although he wishes he could remove Caesars spirit, but leave him be, he accepts that he must be killed. However, he refuses to kill him savagely, for that would make him no better. Finally, Portia is strong in her heart. She is continuously hurt by her husbands lack of trust in her, and feels as if she is no more than his trophy wife. The pain she has endured has made her stronger, giving her the courage to finally face him. It is these unique strengths that make all the characters memorable, as the strengths we have make us incomparable to each other.

Strength comes in many different forms. What we must endure in our day to day lives makes us all stronger in unrivaled ways. For some, it is their dedication to what they believe in makes them stronger. For others it is their survival of pain that keeps them going. There are a thousand different ways to interpret strength, and a thousand different ways to be strong, but all lead back to the individual person, and what they have had to endure.


Self Assessment
One thing I am trying to work on in my writing is the clarity of some of the sentences. I find that if one sentence is unclear, then the ones that follow will also be unclear. One strong point I see in this piece of writing is how specific my examples of strong characters are in the body paragraph. However, I feel that a weak point would be my opening and closing paragraphs, for they are very vague. For this essay I would give myself a B.











Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Essay #17

Jade Gilman
English 9
Mr. Salsich
4/6/11

Opening Paragraph
TS- Are we masters of fate?
            CM- What we do affects not only ourselves, but others around us
            CM- Need to learn to realize the aftermath of decisions we make
CS- However, can’t control outside world, things happen

First Body Paragraph
TS- Whether we can control fate is controversial subject, depends on the situation we are in.
            SD- To say we are masters of our fate is to say we can control the world
                        CM- Something we can’t do
                        CM- Always trying

            SD- Some say we are masters of our fate,
                        CM- Can’t cope with the thought that someone else is controlling them
                        CM- However makes you responsible.

            SD- Sometimes easier to say fate controls us
                        CM- Some take comfort in knowing it's not all their fault
                        CM- Can help you to stop stressing over what you should done

CS- Whether we can control fate depends not only on the situation, but what we believe in.

Second Body Paragraph
TS- I have conflicting views on whether I am master of my own fate.

            SD- Times when I find it hard to choose
                        CM- So many different things going on, hard to make decision.
                        CM- Only makes me more confused.
           
            SD- Easy to switch around beliefs
                        CM- When things are going good, I praise myself
                        CM- When things go bad, blame fate.

            SD- Currently trying to figure out what I believe in
                        CM- Very difficult thing to do
                        CM- Find myself confused most of the time.

CS- Even though I don't know what I believe in, I take trying to find out seriously.


Closing Paragraph
TS- Question, are we masters of our fate? Very controversial.
            CM- Many different parts
            CM- Many different ways to interpret it
CS- Ultimately depends on the person, no two people are alike.



Are masters of our own fate? What we do in life not only affects ourselves, but those around us. It is important to realize the aftermath of the decisions we make in life, for they could change how we, and those around us, live our ever day lives. However, confusion arises when we argue the fact that we can’t always control what happens in the outside world.

Whether we can control our fate is a very controversial subject, mainly because it depends on not only the person, but the situation they are in. To say we are masters of our fate is to say we can control not only ourselves, but the world around us. This is obviously something we can’t do. However, it is inevitable that at one point or another, we will try. There are those who say we are, indeed, masters of our fate. It is often hard for those who truly believe this to be able to grasp the concept that there might be something, or someone, else controlling how we live our day to day lives. However, with this being said, those who believe this also must take full responsibility when problems arise. On the other side of things, there are those who find it easier to believe that something, whether fate or not, is controlling them. The comfort they feel is based on the fact that they can't control every aspect of their lives, and choose to blame it on fate. By doing this, it is often much easier to accept the pains that accompany us in life, giving them the ability to move forward. Whether we can control fate not only depends on the situation, but the person as well.

When I direct the question towards myself, however, I find that I have very conflicting views. There are many times in my life when it is more that difficult to choose whether I believe in fate. There are so many different things going on every day that choosing a definite answer is almost impossible. Unfortunately for me, this only makes me more confused. Even with this being said, it is more than easy to switch around my beliefs as the days go by. When things are going good, I praise myself rather than fate. On the other hand, when things are going bad, I find it comforting to think it's not entirely my fault. Currently, I find myself stuck between two beliefs. Choosing one has proven itself almost impossible. I find myself accepting the fact that I might never really be able choose between the two, taking what I feel into consideration and just trying to get through life.

The question, "Are we masters of our own fates?" has proven itself more than controversial. There are so many different parts strung together, making is near impossible to sort through. Even if you do find your way through the tangled mess, there can be a thousand different ways for others to interpret your findings. Ultimately, it depends on the person, for no two people are alike.